Saturday, November 21, 2015

Topic Proposal

                Classroom attendance is completely different from high school to college. Most college courses do not require attendance. This is especially true for lectures. However, many general education courses at the University of Iowa require attendance and use it towards one final grade. The problem with this attendance policy is that it kills students’ intrinsic motivation to learn in class.

                As a freshmen, I have felt this effect. I generally look forward to going to classes that are do not require attendance because I am interested in learning more. On the other hand, rather than developing an eagerness for learning, I often feel resentful towards going to classes that require attendance.

                In this presentation I will argue that University of Iowa students generally feel less motivated and interested in courses that require attendance. To solve this problem, the University must do away with required attendance policies. I plan to utilize various social and psychological journals in the University of Iowa database to support my argument. I will also interview individuals or survey the class on their opinions regarding the issue of required class attendance.

Thursday, November 5, 2015

IMRaD Report
Abstract
                What factors influence a first-year student’s transition to college? This study analyzes the different ways in which in-state and out-of-state students adjust to college life. A sample of twenty University of Iowa freshmen students were surveyed about their perceived adjustment to different aspects of college. Sample data indicates a potential advantage for out-of-state students in transitioning to college, as out-of-state students reported that since beginning college they have generally experienced more improvement in sleep, exercise, emotional well-being, and relationship building than their in-state counterparts. Based on these findings, it is necessary to ask why. More research on this topic is necessary before we can conclude why this trend has occurred, although it’s possible that out-of-state students become more productive, on average, as a result of being thrust into a new environment.
Introduction
                A student’s transition to college can be one of the most exciting yet vulnerable times in one’s life. For decades researchers and recent high school graduates have wondered about what factors contribute to a smooth college transition. In 2012, researchers concluded that social connections are the most important factor for a successful college transition, indicating a potential disadvantage for out-of-state students (DeRosier & Leary). Additionally, out-of-state students generally pay higher tuition and may have to adapt to an entirely new culture. So, if DeRosier and Leary are correct, what is it like for the approximately 13.7% (Dotterweich, Baryla, & Rochelle) of students that enroll in out-of-state universities?
                The objective of this study is to discover ways in which the college transition differs for in-state and out-of-state students and also to discuss potential answers as to why the experiences may differ. Unlike many studies that use GPA or test scores to judge the experience of a student, this study focuses on how well individuals believe they are doing. The end result is a measure of one’s perceived level of adjustment.
Methods
Participants
A convenience sample of twenty freshmen students at the University of Iowa were surveyed.
Data Source
Surveys were conducted through the online survey application Survey Monkey.
Survey Questions
                First, participants were asked which city and state they permanently reside in. They were then asked to note whether or not they live in a suburb of a bigger city and, if applicable, which city the suburb is a part of. Next, participants were instructed to rank a series of statements based on their level of agreement since beginning college courses. Five choices were given for each statement and each choice was given a value for data analysis: strongly disagree (-2), disagree (-1), neither agree nor disagree (0), agree (1), and strongly agree (2).
The statements were presented as follows:
                Your academics have improved.
                You get better sleep.
                You exercise more.
                Your emotional well-being has improved.
                You are content with the relationships you’ve made.
                Participants were made aware that the purpose of the survey was to study the relation between the location of one’s hometown and his/her perceived adjustment to college life.
Data Analysis
                Ranked responses were given the stated values so as to show positive adjustment as a positive number and negative adjustment as a negative number. Responses were then separated into two groups: in-state and out-of-state students.
Results

Figure 1: Average rankings of in-state and out-of-state students
                Figure 1 shows that on average, the students surveyed have adjusted well to college life. Each category has a positive average for both in-state and out-of-state students, therefore the sample evidence indicates that freshmen students generally have a positive adjustment to college life.
                There is also a clear discrepancy between in-state and out-of-state students’ level of adjustment in all categories except academics. On average, out-of-state students self-reported 25% lower in academics, 100% higher in sleep, 500% higher in exercise, and 50% higher in both emotional well-being and relationships.

Discussion
                The results of this study raise many questions. First, the sample data shows that students believe they are generally doing well academically. College courses are considered more rigorous than high school courses and therefore one would assume a negative result for academics. Sample bias may be responsible for this outcome. Of the twenty individuals in the sample, a majority were direct admits into the University of Iowa’s business school. Therefore, many individuals surveyed may already be academically inclined, thus the data shows a positive result for academics. Additionally, in-state students reported a slightly higher level of academic wellness than out-of-state students. Because the sampling method was not random there is no way test whether in-state reported academic levels are significantly higher than out-of-state levels, although if it were at some point proven statistically significant, the discrepancy may be explained by lower levels of reported in-state student improvement in the four other surveyed categories of college life.
                This brings us to the next point. Out-of-state students reported much higher results in the subsequent four categories of college life. Why could this be? If DeRosier and Leary assert that social connections are the most important factor in a successful college transition, how do you explain the results of this survey? Of course, as previously stated, this data was collected through a convenience sample and therefore there is a high probability that it isn’t an accurate representation of the population of first-year college students. But, if we assume the sample data is at least a semi-accurate portrayal of the population, one potential reason for the survey results may be that out-of-state students generally make social connections than in-state students during the beginning of the academic year. In-state students, on average, have more friends to lean on as they begin college but may become distant with these individuals as the year progresses. Out-of-state students, on the other hand, generally do not have the luxury of existent relationships and may feel much more motivated to form new relationships quickly. It is possible this may also cause a ripple effect and motivate out-of-state students to become more productive individuals in general, thus providing a potential explanation for the higher reported increases in sleep, exercise, and emotional well-being.
                Now, it is important to state once again that these ideas are only ideas, they are not conclusions based on any statistical level of certainty. The topic of this report is interesting, although it would benefit from more rigorous research methods. If a cross-country study that employed random samples of students at randomly chosen colleges and universities were conducted, one would likely be able to provide reliable data correlations and to draw statistically significant conclusions.
               



References

DeRosier, M. E., & Leary, K. A. (2012). Factors Promoting Positive Adaptation and Resilience during the Transition to College. Wuhan, Hubei, China: Scientific Research Publishing.
Dotterweich, D., Baryla, E. A., & Rochelle, C. F. (2011). Nonresident Enrollment at Religious and Secular Colleges. Johnson City, Tennessee, USA: Taylor and Francis Group.

Appendix
Respondent
Residence
Population
Location
Academics
Sleep
Exercise
Well-Being
Relationships
1
Chicago, IL
9,730,000
out-of-state
0
1
2
1
1
2
Twin Cities, MN
3,798,000
out-of-state
0
0
0
1
2
3
Springfield, IL
208,200
out-of-state
1
1
1
0
1
4
Iowa City, IA
164,400
in-state
0
0
0
1
2
5
Chicago, IL
9,730,000
out-of-state
1
1
2
0
1
6
Des Moines, IA
611,500
in-state
0
0
-1
0
0
7
Cedar Rapids, IA
257,900
in-state
0
1
1
0
1
8
St. Louis, MO
2,796,000
out-of-state
0
-1
-2
0
2
9
Des Moines, IA
611,500
in-state
0
1
2
2
1
10
Madison, WI
243,400
out-of-state
0
0
-1
0
1
11
Wayland, IA
1,000
in-state
0
1
-1
1
1
12
Waverly, IA
10,100
in-state
0
-2
-2
-1
1
13
Iowa City, IA
164,400
in-state
0
1
0
1
1
14
Chicago, IL
9,730,000
out-of-state
-1
1
1
1
-1
15
Des Moines, IA
611,500
in-state
1
-1
-1
-1
-1
16
Iowa City, IA
164,400
in-state
1
-1
1
0
0
17
Des Moines, IA
611,500
in-state
1
2
1
1
2
18
Des Moines, IA
611,500
in-state
0
0
-1
-1
0
19
Des Moines, IA
611,500
in-state
-1
1
2
1
1
20
Bristow, VA
8,900
out-of-state
0
1
1
1
2


Tuesday, November 3, 2015

IMRaD Rankings

1) Sample 4, grade: A+
2) Sample 2, grade: A
3) Sample 1, grade: B
4) Sample 3, grade: C


Sample 4 is clearly the best report. The author conveys his or her points well and uses good formatting and quality visual aids. Sample 2 contains many of the same positive aspects of sample 4, although it is not as easy to read and could use additional depth on the topics. Sample 1 is alright. The works cited and appendix should be on separate pages from the body of the paper, and the procedure of the survey is questionable. Picture 3 does not even look like a symmetrical face. Sample 1 also has a few grammar mistakes. Lastly, sample 3 is simply not a good paper. It has a lot of room for improvement in almost every aspect of the assignment.

Thursday, October 29, 2015

Monday, October 26, 2015

Freakonomics Excerpt & Economist Sells Bagels

Although the two articles cover the same topic, they are much different from each other. They both analyze data about bagel delivery company but in completely different ways. The "Economist Sells Bagels" utilizes the IMRaD format. It has a clearly designed format with an abstract, page numbers, section headings, etc. The Freakonomics excerpt, rather, is a narrative with the intent of interesting the reader, thus it utilizes more word choice to garner pathos appeal, whereas "Economist Sells Bagels" strictly uses ethos and logos.

IMRaD paper ideas

Research Idea #1
Topic: Wealthiest 1% influence on presidential elections
For this research topic I will survey at least twenty people with 3-4 questions. I am not sure yet how I will choose people to survey as it will be difficult to use an approximate random sample and to curb sample bias since it will have to be an optional survey.
My survey questions will be along the lines of:
                -Do you believe the wealthiest 1% of Americans has a disproportionate influence on U.S presidential elections? If so, estimate what percent you believe the top 1% to have on elections.
                -Do you believe the U.S. federal government is doing anything to curb the influence of the 1%? If so, what? If no, is the influence of the 1% growing?
                -Do you believe the influence of the 1% is a problem? Explain. If so, do you believe you have the power to change the situation? How?
Before presenting my findings, I will present historical data on similar polls as well as data on the percentages of campaign donations from different socio-economic classes. All of these sources should be scholarly, peer-reviewed articles. I will search for them on sites such as Google Scholar or EbscoHost.
Note that all questions start with, “Do you believe…” The reason for this will tie into my discussion section. I will make sure to note that the historical data matters not so much as my findings because people vote based on what they believe to be true, not what is actually true. This will be an interesting point if there proves to be a disparity between historical data and my findings. If there is no disparity, it will still be interesting, yet less profound.


Research Idea #2
Topic: Student debt at the University of Iowa
For this research topic I will survey at least twenty people with 3-4 questions. I will potentially choose survey participants by choosing multiple distinct places on the University of Iowa campus to survey only a few people. This way I will get a variety of respondents, both male and female and of a many different majors and ages.
Before introducing my findings I will present a historical context with data on college prices, parent aid, scholarship aid, need based aid, student debt at graduation, and time taken to pay off student debt. Again I will only use peer-reviewed articles as sources. It may require additional effort to find data specifically on the University of Iowa.
Survey questions will be something along the lines of:
                -How much does the University of Iowa cost for you per year?
                -Have you taken out loans? Do your loans cover the full cost? If they cover more than the            amount needed, do you spend the leftover funds?
                -What percentage of your tuition and fees are paid for by scholarships? Grants? Parents?
In the discussion area of my paper I will attempt to connect my findings with historical data. This would be an extremely interesting topic if my sample data is reliable. I suspect the discussion area of my report will develop as I analyze my findings.

Monday, October 5, 2015

Speech Outline

Greeting/Hook:

Background story of why I chose to analyze Kum & Go
-Sophomore year of high school
-My friends and I would hang out outside of Kum & Go all the time
-We would go there after school
-We’d be there every weekend
-Spent thousands of dollars on food and gas


Thesis Statement:

Kum & Go wants customers to Kum & Stay. Kum & Go effectively influences customers to do so through advertising campaigns, focused on pathos and ethos appeal, that build its public image as a homey, welcoming place of business that cares about the local communities that it serves.


Overview:

To test my thesis….
-I examined background information on Kum & Go
-Analyzed two advertisements
-Analyzed outside article on Kum & Go
-Tested the level of pathos and ethos Kum & Go uses in its marketing operations
-I explain the purpose and reasoning behind Kum & Go’s decisions


Transition:

-General background information on Kum & Go
-Facts and statistics on when/where Kum & Go started
-Locations Kum & Go serves today, number of locations, etc.
-Define target market/audience for Kum & Go and most appropriate rhetorical appeals for said audience


Main Idea 1:

-Cover first advertisement
-Establishes quality of products
-Explain ethos and pathos of advertisement
-Connection to thesis: Kum & Go is not only out to get a profit. Kum & Go cares about the customer.      Kum & Go delivers quality products at affordable price.


Main Idea 2:

-Cover second advertisement
-Ad is designed to build Kum & Go’s welcoming, homey image
-Cover the importance of FREE coffee
-Explain ethos
-Thoroughly explain pathos
-Small business values
-Diminished association with corporate big business


Main Idea 3:

-Cover article on Philanthropy
-Donate mainly to causes that support youth and philanthropy
-Importance of having Kum & Go name attached to said causes
-Strong pathos appeal
-Investment in future of Kum & Go


Conclusion:

In conclusion…
-Kum & Go builds its reputation for quality (ethos) through ads such as… (first ad)
                -brief summary
-Kum & Go builds pathos through ads such as… (second ad)
                -brief summary
-Kum & Go further builds pathos and invests in its future through its philanthropy and community           outreach… (summarize third main point)

Kum & Go has effectively built and will continue to build its reputation as a welcoming business that is an integral part of the community.


(Clincher) It provides quality products and services and gives back to the communities it serves.